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読みやすい日本語を書くための4原則",{"type":7,"value":8,"toc":599},"minimark",[9,13,22,27,93,99,102,106,116,121,124,137,143,192,197,205,210,215,217,221,223,234,238,280,285,290,295,300,304,309,311,315,318,322,325,333,337,369,373,378,383,388,394,396,400,403,407,410,421,425,457,461,466,470,475,477,481,484,488,491,499,502,506,538,542,547,551,556,558,561,564,591,593,596],[10,11,5],"h1",{"id":12},"修飾の語順-読みやすい日本語を書くための4原則",[14,15,16,17,21],"p",{},"修飾語が複数あるとき、並べ方を間違えると別のものを修飾したと読み手は勘違いする。語順は気分ではなく、",[18,19,20],"strong",{},"誤読防止の道具","だ。",[23,24,26],"h2",{"id":25},"_4原則の概要","4原則の概要",[28,29,30,47],"table",{},[31,32,33],"thead",{},[34,35,36,41,44],"tr",{},[37,38,40],"th",{"align":39},"center","優先度",[37,42,43],{},"原則",[37,45,46],{},"要点",[48,49,50,62,72,83],"tbody",{},[34,51,52,56,59],{},[53,54,55],"td",{"align":39},"★★★",[53,57,58],{},"節を先に、句をあとに",[53,60,61],{},"動詞を含むかたまりを前へ",[34,63,64,66,69],{},[53,65,55],{"align":39},[53,67,68],{},"長い修飾語は前、短いものは後ろ",[53,70,71],{},"長さで並べる",[34,73,74,77,80],{},[53,75,76],{"align":39},"★★",[53,78,79],{},"大状況から小状況へ",[53,81,82],{},"重要なものを先に",[34,84,85,87,90],{},[53,86,76],{"align":39},[53,88,89],{},"親和度で配置転換",[53,91,92],{},"誤読しやすい組み合わせを離す",[14,94,95,98],{},[18,96,97],{},"原則1・2が土台","、原則3・4は状況に応じて調整する。",[100,101],"hr",{},[23,103,105],{"id":104},"原則1節を先に句をあとに","原則1：節を先に、句をあとに",[14,107,108,111,112,115],{},[18,109,110],{},"節","：動詞的なまとまりを含む（例：「横線の引かれた」）\n",[18,113,114],{},"句","：短い形容詞的なかたまり（例：「白い」「厚手の」）",[117,118,120],"h3",{"id":119},"例題1紙に3つの修飾語をつける","例題1：「紙」に3つの修飾語をつける",[14,122,123],{},"次の3つを一文にまとめたい：",[125,126,127,131,134],"ul",{},[128,129,130],"li",{},"白い紙",[128,132,133],{},"横線の引かれた紙",[128,135,136],{},"厚手の紙",[14,138,139,142],{},[18,140,141],{},"順序の選択肢","：",[28,144,145,158],{},[31,146,147],{},[34,148,149,152,155],{},[37,150,151],{"align":39},"順序",[37,153,154],{},"文",[37,156,157],{"align":39},"判定",[48,159,160,171,181],{},[34,161,162,165,168],{},[53,163,164],{"align":39},"①",[53,166,167],{},"白い横線の引かれた厚手の紙",[53,169,170],{"align":39},"❌",[34,172,173,176,179],{},[53,174,175],{"align":39},"②",[53,177,178],{},"厚手の横線の引かれた白い紙",[53,180,170],{"align":39},[34,182,183,186,189],{},[53,184,185],{"align":39},"③",[53,187,188],{},"横線の引かれた白い厚手の紙",[53,190,191],{"align":39},"✅",[14,193,194,142],{},[18,195,196],{},"なぜ①②は悪いのか",[125,198,199,202],{},[128,200,201],{},"①は「白い」が「横線」にかかり、「白い横線」と誤読される",[128,203,204],{},"②は「厚手の」が「横線」にかかり、「厚手の横線」と誤読される",[14,206,207,142],{},[18,208,209],{},"なぜ③が良いのか",[125,211,212],{},[128,213,214],{},"節（横線の引かれた）を先に出すことで句（白い、厚手の）が後ろの名詞に吸い寄せられない",[100,216],{},[117,218,220],{"id":219},"例題2走るに3つの修飾語をつける","例題2：「走る」に3つの修飾語をつける",[14,222,123],{},[125,224,225,228,231],{},[128,226,227],{},"速く走る",[128,229,230],{},"ライトを消して走る",[128,232,233],{},"止まらずに走る",[14,235,236,142],{},[18,237,141],{},[28,239,240,250],{},[31,241,242],{},[34,243,244,246,248],{},[37,245,151],{"align":39},[37,247,154],{},[37,249,157],{"align":39},[48,251,252,261,271],{},[34,253,254,256,259],{},[53,255,164],{"align":39},[53,257,258],{},"速くライトを消して止まらずに走る",[53,260,170],{"align":39},[34,262,263,265,268],{},[53,264,175],{"align":39},[53,266,267],{},"ライトを消して速く止まらずに走る",[53,269,270],{"align":39},"△",[34,272,273,275,278],{},[53,274,185],{"align":39},[53,276,277],{},"ライトを消して止まらずに速く走る",[53,279,191],{"align":39},[14,281,282,142],{},[18,283,284],{},"なぜ①は悪いのか",[125,286,287],{},[128,288,289],{},"「速く」が「消す」にかかり、「速く消す」と誤読される",[14,291,292,142],{},[18,293,294],{},"なぜ②は微妙か",[125,296,297],{},[128,298,299],{},"「速く止まらずに」と結びつき、「止まらないことを速くする」という変な読みが生まれやすい",[14,301,302,142],{},[18,303,209],{},[125,305,306],{},[128,307,308],{},"節（ライトを消して、止まらずに）を先に出し句（速く）を最後に置くことで誤読を防ぐ",[100,310],{},[23,312,314],{"id":313},"原則2長い修飾語は前短いものは後ろ","原則2：長い修飾語は前、短いものは後ろ",[14,316,317],{},"長いものを後ろに回すと、読者は長いかたまりを抱えたまま係り先を待つことになり、途中で迷う。",[117,319,321],{"id":320},"例題直感したを修飾する","例題：「直感した」を修飾する",[14,323,324],{},"次の2つの修飾語がある：",[125,326,327,330],{},[128,328,329],{},"「明日は雨だと」（短い）",[128,331,332],{},"「この地方の自然に長くなじんできた私は」（長い）",[14,334,335,142],{},[18,336,141],{},[28,338,339,349],{},[31,340,341],{},[34,342,343,345,347],{},[37,344,151],{"align":39},[37,346,154],{},[37,348,157],{"align":39},[48,350,351,360],{},[34,352,353,355,358],{},[53,354,164],{"align":39},[53,356,357],{},"明日は雨だとこの地方の自然に長くなじんできた私は直感した",[53,359,170],{"align":39},[34,361,362,364,367],{},[53,363,175],{"align":39},[53,365,366],{},"この地方の自然に長くなじんできた私は明日は雨だと直感した",[53,368,191],{"align":39},[14,370,371,142],{},[18,372,284],{},[125,374,375],{},[128,376,377],{},"長い修飾語が後ろにあり、読者が途中で迷う",[14,379,380,142],{},[18,381,382],{},"なぜ②が良いのか",[125,384,385],{},[128,386,387],{},"長い修飾語を前に出すことで流れが自然になる",[14,389,390,393],{},[18,391,392],{},"注意","：これは「主語と述語を近くせよ」とは別の原則。読みやすさの理由は「長→短」の並びにある。",[100,395],{},[23,397,399],{"id":398},"原則3大状況から小状況へ","原則3：大状況から小状況へ",[14,401,402],{},"長さが同じでも、意味の重さが違う場合がある。全体を包む大きい状況を先に、その中の一部分を後に置く。",[117,404,406],{"id":405},"例題与えたを修飾する","例題：「与えた」を修飾する",[14,408,409],{},"次の3つの要素がある：",[125,411,412,415,418],{},[128,413,414],{},"初夏の雨（大状況：全体を包む）",[128,416,417],{},"もえる若葉（中状況）",[128,419,420],{},"豊かな潤い（小状況：一部分）",[14,422,423,142],{},[18,424,141],{},[28,426,427,437],{},[31,428,429],{},[34,430,431,433,435],{},[37,432,151],{"align":39},[37,434,154],{},[37,436,157],{"align":39},[48,438,439,448],{},[34,440,441,443,446],{},[53,442,164],{"align":39},[53,444,445],{},"豊かな潤いをもえる若葉に初夏の雨が与えた",[53,447,170],{"align":39},[34,449,450,452,455],{},[53,451,175],{"align":39},[53,453,454],{},"初夏の雨がもえる若葉に豊かな潤いを与えた",[53,456,191],{"align":39},[14,458,459,142],{},[18,460,284],{},[125,462,463],{},[128,464,465],{},"小さいもの（潤い）から始まり、座りが悪い",[14,467,468,142],{},[18,469,382],{},[125,471,472],{},[128,473,474],{},"大状況（初夏の雨）から始まり、自然に読める",[100,476],{},[23,478,480],{"id":479},"原則4親和度なじみで配置転換","原則4：親和度（なじみ）で配置転換",[14,482,483],{},"語と語が結びつきやすいほど誤読が生まれる。なじみの強い語同士を離す。",[117,485,487],{"id":486},"例題照り映えたを修飾する","例題：「照り映えた」を修飾する",[14,489,490],{},"次の要素がある：",[125,492,493,496],{},[128,494,495],{},"初夏のみどり",[128,497,498],{},"もえる夕日",[14,500,501],{},"「みどり」と「もえる」は親和度が高い（よく一緒に使われる）。",[14,503,504,142],{},[18,505,141],{},[28,507,508,518],{},[31,509,510],{},[34,511,512,514,516],{},[37,513,151],{"align":39},[37,515,154],{},[37,517,157],{"align":39},[48,519,520,529],{},[34,521,522,524,527],{},[53,523,164],{"align":39},[53,525,526],{},"初夏のみどりがもえる夕日に照り映えた",[53,528,170],{"align":39},[34,530,531,533,536],{},[53,532,175],{"align":39},[53,534,535],{},"もえる夕日に初夏のみどりが照り映えた",[53,537,191],{"align":39},[14,539,540,142],{},[18,541,284],{},[125,543,544],{},[128,545,546],{},"「みどり」と「もえる」が隣り合い、「みどりがもえる」と誤読される",[14,548,549,142],{},[18,550,382],{},[125,552,553],{},[128,554,555],{},"親和度の高い語を離して誤読を防ぐ",[100,557],{},[23,559,560],{"id":560},"実践チェックリスト",[14,562,563],{},"文章を書いたら、以下の順でチェックする：",[565,566,567,573,579,585],"ol",{},[128,568,569,572],{},[18,570,571],{},"節と句の順序","：節（動詞を含むかたまり）が句より前にあるか？",[128,574,575,578],{},[18,576,577],{},"長さの順序","：長い修飾語が短いものより前にあるか？",[128,580,581,584],{},[18,582,583],{},"意味の大小","：大状況が小状況より前にあるか？",[128,586,587,590],{},[18,588,589],{},"親和度","：誤読を誘う組み合わせが隣り合っていないか？",[100,592],{},[23,594,595],{"id":595},"参考",[14,597,598],{},"『日本語の作文技術』（朝日文庫）第三章「修飾の順序」より整理",{"title":600,"searchDepth":601,"depth":601,"links":602},"",2,[603,604,609,612,615,618,619],{"id":25,"depth":601,"text":26},{"id":104,"depth":601,"text":105,"children":605},[606,608],{"id":119,"depth":607,"text":120},3,{"id":219,"depth":607,"text":220},{"id":313,"depth":601,"text":314,"children":610},[611],{"id":320,"depth":607,"text":321},{"id":398,"depth":601,"text":399,"children":613},[614],{"id":405,"depth":607,"text":406},{"id":479,"depth":601,"text":480,"children":616},[617],{"id":486,"depth":607,"text":487},{"id":560,"depth":601,"text":560},{"id":595,"depth":601,"text":595},"personal",null,"複数の修飾語を並べるとき、誤読を防ぎ読みやすくするための語順ルール。節→句、長→短、大→小、親和度の4原則を実例とともに解説。","md",{},true,"/japanese-writing-manners-test",false,"2025-12-24T00:00:00.000Z",{"title":5,"description":622},"2025-12/2025-12-24/japanese-writing-manners-test",[632,633,634,635],"日本語","ライティング","文章術","修飾語","9RdZ8Gf1q8ZhornORMrMIVQxeyX378eRKDnqKukn0RM",[],[639,643,647,650],{"title":640,"path":641,"publishedAt":642},"vivid-writingスキルの作成 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